Template:Did you know nominations/Freeheld (upcoming film)
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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 20:28, 22 October 2014 (UTC)
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Freeheld (upcoming film)
[edit]- ... that the upcoming film Freeheld, starring Julianne Moore and Ellen Page, is based on the true story of police officer Laurel Hester's battle to transfer her pension to her domestic partner?
- Reviewed: Harutyun Shahrikyan
- Comment: Possibly not the best wording... please feel free to revise or suggest an alt.
Created by 97198 (talk). Self nominated at 05:46, 11 October 2014 (UTC).
- Well sourced article that stays on-topic. At 1989 characters (after subtracting cast list) it squeaks through on length. No copyvio. Good to go!
- I would, however, suggest ALT1: ... that the upcoming film Freeheld, is based on the true story of a police officer's battle to transfer her pension to her domestic partner?
- It's shorter and though it removes the star names, it's more to the point. PanydThe muffin is not subtle 20:28, 21 October 2014 (UTC)
