Template:Did you know nominations/First Lady Bake-Off

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The result was: promoted by Edge3 (talk) 02:44, 26 June 2023 (UTC)

First Lady Bake-Off

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... that the First Lady Bake-Off came from a political gaffe by Hillary Clinton and predicted five out of seven elections? Source: https://www.cnn.com/2020/09/01/politics/cookies-first-lady-competition/index.html, https://www.independent.co.uk/news/world/americas/how-the-cookie-crumbles-the-great-first-lady-bakeoff-851694.html
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Created by AllWeKnowOfHeaven (talk). Self-nominated at 19:55, 20 June 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/First Lady Bake-Off; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy compliance:

Adequate sourcing:
Neutral:
Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

Image eligibility:

Freely licensed: - na
Used in article: - NA
Clear at 100px: - NA

QPQ: - N/A
Overall: Hook is very interesting. This is the nominator's first nominated article, so a QPQ is not needed at this time. Earwig reported a 41.9% copyright violation but it seems to have come from the quotes provided in the article, which were accurately attributed. However, I do suggest trimming them down or paraphrasing. For the line "The competition became known for often predicting the results of the presidential election", it should end with a comma. As a suggestion, I think there is also potential for the lead to be expanded, but that is not required for DYK. I assume good faith on print sources. lullabying (talk) 03:40, 21 June 2023 (UTC)

Thanks for the feedback! I trimmed some quotes down and used more paraphrasing. I also expanded the lead to summarize the whole article better. AllWeKnowOfHeaven (talk) 00:13, 22 June 2023 (UTC)

Good to go. AGF on print sources. lullabying (talk) 01:24, 25 June 2023 (UTC)

Addendum: most of the print sources are actually online as well!

Good to go, then. lullabying (talk) 01:25, 25 June 2023 (UTC)