Template:Did you know nominations/Fernando Cajías

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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 21:04, 21 January 2023 (UTC)

Fernando Cajías

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... that Fernando Cajías, one of the first professional historians in Bolivia, composed part of history academia's "Mirista-wing"? Source: Oporto Ordóñez 2012, p. 144
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Improved to Good Article status by Krisgabwoosh (talk). Self-nominated at 10:22, 2 January 2023 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook eligibility:

Cited:
Interesting:
Other problems: - minor problem

QPQ: Done.

Overall: @Krisgabwoosh: Good article. However, while the hook says "one of the first professional historians" the article states "the first generation of professional historians" which I feel are two different things. A rewording would be nice. Onegreatjoke (talk) 18:56, 2 January 2023 (UTC)

Looking at the biographical dictionary I cited, only eight individuals, including Cajías, are noted as belonging to this "first generation," most being alumni to a single teacher. That would be my argument for keeping as is, but if you still think it should be changed, how about something like: "... who belongs to the first generation of professional historians ..."? Krisgabwoosh (talk) 23:33, 2 January 2023 (UTC)

That's fine. Approve. Onegreatjoke (talk) 20:48, 3 January 2023 (UTC)