Template:Did you know nominations/Emergency Federal Register

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:42, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Emergency Federal Register

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~~... that the United States' official journal, The Federal Register, may be suspended and replaced with the Emergency Federal Register in the event of an attack against the U.S.?~~

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Gran Alternativa 2012

Created by LavaBaron (talk). Self-nominated at 08:14, 19 March 2016 (UTC).

Length, date checks out. QPQ done. No close paraphrase found in spot check. But the sentence supporting the hook needs a reference directly after, not sure which one of the references would be most suitable. Also, language-wise I'd prefer:
ALT1 ... that the United States' official journal, The Federal Register, may be suspended and replaced with the Emergency Federal Register in the event of an attack against the country? (to avoid repeating 'Unites States/U.S.' twice in the hook) --Soman (talk) 14:17, 19 March 2016 (UTC)

Thanks, Soman - fixed and endorse ALT1. LavaBaron (talk) 16:13, 19 March 2016 (UTC)

Great,

. (Usually I wouldn't tick an ALT I proposed, but in this case the difference with the original hook is marginal). --Soman (talk) 19:46, 19 March 2016 (UTC)