Template:Did you know nominations/E. Ann Hoefly
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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 13:40, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
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E. Ann Hoefly
[edit]- ... that E. Ann Hoefly was responsible for 180 United States Air Force medical facilities? p300: Hoefly's responsibilities expanded to include 180 medical facilities around the world
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Moved to mainspace by Dumelow (talk). Self-nominated at 00:51, 6 December 2017 (UTC).
New enough, not a copyvio although a heavy dependency on the USAF source with some paraphrasing, but facts are facts I suppose. Just one thing outstanding (I made a couple of tweaks), could you add a sentence or two more to the lead? While we don't mandate MOS compliance for DYK, it would be nice to see WP:LEAD followed a bit closer here, i.e. summarise one or two more of the key points of the article in the lead? The Rambling Man (talk) 21:16, 7 December 2017 (UTC)
- Hi The Rambling Man, thanks for reviewing I have now completed a QPQ review over at Template:Did you know nominations/KA3N Gorgon III (2/2). I have expanded the lead and split the article into sections - Dumelow (talk) 15:53, 9 December 2017 (UTC)
all good for me now. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:21, 9 December 2017 (UTC)
- Hi The Rambling Man, thanks for reviewing I have now completed a QPQ review over at Template:Did you know nominations/KA3N Gorgon III (2/2). I have expanded the lead and split the article into sections - Dumelow (talk) 15:53, 9 December 2017 (UTC)
