Template:Did you know nominations/Dylan Keogh
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The result was: promoted by MPJ-DK 22:34, 18 September 2016 (UTC)
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Dylan Keogh
[edit]... that actor William Beck believed that he was meant to get the role of Dylan Keogh in Casualty, as he had attended medical school?
ALT1:... that Casualty's story producer gave Dylan Keogh OCD, as he wanted to challenge the character?- Reviewed: Jurassic Coast
- Comment: Please feel free to tweak the hook(s), or suggest another.
Moved to mainspace by JuneGloom07 (talk). Self-nominated at 01:27, 31 August 2016 (UTC).
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No issues found with article, ready for human review.
- ✓ This article is new and was created on 19:09, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
- ✓ This article meets the DYK criteria at 21622 characters
- ✓ All paragraphs in this article have at least one citation
- ✓ This article has no outstanding maintenance tags
- ? A copyright violation is suspected by an automated tool, with 46.2% confidence. (confirm)
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• No overall issues detected
- ✓ The hook ALT0 is an appropriate length at 136 characters
- ✓ The hook ALT1 is an appropriate length at 88 characters
- ✓ JuneGloom07 has more than 5 DYK credits. A QPQ review of Template:Did you know nominations/Jurassic Coast was performed for this nomination.
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- So, this is my first review, to familiarise myself with the process. This will probably need another editor. The article was moved on Aug. 28th, satisfying the "new" requirement. 21584 characters, very long. Article has generally sufficient citations. Copyvio is attributed to quotes, so I think that's okay. As for the hook, the first one doesn't really state that the role was meant for him exactly, it just says that it came at a nice time and that it felt right. Is that the same thing? I don't know. I generally prefer the second one, and it even sounds more interesting, but I couldn't verify the claim, since my Shockwave plugin kept crashing. (I'm assuming it was on the "behind the scenes") video. Someone else with a better video player should check it out. Hmm, I don't know, but I'd take your word for it.
MediaKill13 (talk) 07:58, 1 September 2016 (UTC)
- @JuneGloom07: How about this hook: ALT2 ...that William Beck, who played Dylan Keogh in Casualty, was told by the producers that Dylan should not smile? MediaKill13 (talk) 08:10, 1 September 2016 (UTC)
- Yeah, I like that one! - JuneGloom07 Talk 19:07, 1 September 2016 (UTC)
MediaKill13 has done a good job at reviewing this article but did not consider whether it meets the neutrality requirement. I think it does, and agree that it is new enough, long enough, and within policy. Going with ALT2, which is interesting and has an inline citation, and striking the other hooks. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:20, 16 September 2016 (UTC)
- So, this is my first review, to familiarise myself with the process. This will probably need another editor. The article was moved on Aug. 28th, satisfying the "new" requirement. 21584 characters, very long. Article has generally sufficient citations. Copyvio is attributed to quotes, so I think that's okay. As for the hook, the first one doesn't really state that the role was meant for him exactly, it just says that it came at a nice time and that it felt right. Is that the same thing? I don't know. I generally prefer the second one, and it even sounds more interesting, but I couldn't verify the claim, since my Shockwave plugin kept crashing. (I'm assuming it was on the "behind the scenes") video. Someone else with a better video player should check it out. Hmm, I don't know, but I'd take your word for it.
