Template:Did you know nominations/Deo Prakash Rai

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The result was: promoted by Vanamonde (talk) 09:26, 29 January 2017 (UTC)

Deo Prakash Rai

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~~... that All India Gorkha League leader Deo Prakash Rai was arrested for political reasons and deported from Malaya in 1950?~~

Reviewed: The Shaker Quarterly

Created by Soman (talk). Self-nominated at 23:00, 5 December 2016 (UTC).

This article is new enough and long enough. The sentence giving the hook facts has three citations but I can access none of them, so the facts are accepted in good faith. The article is neutral and I detected no copyright issues. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:12, 21 January 2017 (UTC)

It would be hookier if you said he was arrested on suspicion of being a communist. I tried to read the snippet view in footnote 3 and wondered if this also mentions that another politician was trying to curry sexual favors from him? Yoninah (talk) 18:10, 22 January 2017 (UTC)

Sorry, I didn't see anything like that. --Soman (talk) 20:55, 22 January 2017 (UTC)

OK, so what about a better hook?
ALT1: ... that All India Gorkha League leader Deo Prakash Rai was denounced as a communist agent and deported from Malaya in 1950? Yoninah (talk) 21:07, 22 January 2017 (UTC)

I'm ok with ALT1. --Soman (talk) 07:31, 23 January 2017 (UTC)

Thanks. Calling on another reviewer to approve ALT1. Yoninah (talk) 11:15, 23 January 2017 (UTC)

Approving ALT1. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:20, 25 January 2017 (UTC)