Template:Did you know nominations/Danny Wylde

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The result was: promoted by Gilderien Chat|List of good deeds 15:10, 2 June 2013 (UTC)

Danny Wylde

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... that pornographer Danny Wylde is an opponent of Measure B, which requires all porn stars to wear condoms during vaginal and anal sex scenes filmed in Los Angeles County?

ALT1 ... that porn star Danny Wylde filmed himself having sex with his girlfriend for the site MakeLoveNotPorn, which aims to provide more realistic representations of sex than those given by hardcore pornography?

Reviewed: Mary Scrope

Created by IShadowed (talk). Self nominated at 14:01, 29 May 2013 (UTC).

I'm concerned about this nomination. The hook... I'm ambivalent about this. It looks interesting, but there may be other porn stars as either opponents or proponents of Measure B. Also, Internet Adult Film Database and Internet Movie Database that you use as sources are user-submitted and not reliable. Perhaps you can remedy this without needing my help, but I might help you if you are unable to. --George Ho (talk) 19:34, 30 May 2013 (UTC)

I've added an alternate hook, which is supported by the Huffington Post/NY Times references among others (neither IAFD nor IMDb). --IShadowed (talk) 21:16, 30 May 2013 (UTC)

IMDB and IAFD still used as inline refs. They should be replaced, or prose info cited by either should be removed along with these refs. --George Ho (talk) 21:21, 30 May 2013 (UTC)

No, they're not. I removed them before. --IShadowed (talk) 21:34, 30 May 2013 (UTC)

Issues resolved, so another review needed. --George Ho (talk) 21:55, 30 May 2013 (UTC)

Date, length, reference and QPQ checks. Suggestion: consider changing the final wording to something like "given by traditional pornography" or "than what is generally seen in pornography". Considering that even if it is realistic, penetrative sex at MakeLoveNotPorn still meets the definition of pornography, therefore sentence could be considered to be flawed. Happy to hear debate on the issue if you disagree. Freikorp (talk) 08:53, 2 June 2013 (UTC)

Amended the hook. --IShadowed (talk) 10:18, 2 June 2013 (UTC)

Good to go. Freikorp (talk) 10:31, 2 June 2013 (UTC)