Template:Did you know nominations/Daniel L. Coberly

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The result was: rejected by reviewer, closed by BorgQueen (talk) 21:00, 28 August 2023 (UTC)

Daniel L. Coberly

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Daniel Coberly circa 2010

• ... that when Dan Coberly (pictured) retired from the military, he held the concurrent rank of an active duty Sergeant Major, and a captain in the Army Reserves? Source: "Introducing Dan Coberly" (PDF). By age 36, he had attained the highest Army enlisted rank of Sergeant Major and the rare distinction of concurrently holding a Presidential Army Reserve direct commission as a Captain. F
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Jarren Horton

Created by Evrik (talk). Self-nominated at 17:27, 19 July 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Daniel L. Coberly; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy compliance:

• Adequate sourcing: - some concerns
• Neutral:
• Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: @Evrik: Good article. Though I'm not seeing where citation 5 is cited nor do I see citation 6 and 7 cite " Among his many assignments, during this period he was a Senior Army Enlisted Advisor and Press Officer for the Centennial Olympic Games Joint Task Force; Media Analyst at the Supreme Headquarters Allied Powers Europe; Senior Correspondent/Chief of Bureaus, Pacific Stars and Stripes daily newspapers; Public Affairs Chief, Department of Defense 50th Anniversary Commemoration of Aviation, and the Women's Army Corps where he supported the role of women in the military" Onegreatjoke (talk) 19:47, 24 July 2023 (UTC)

• @Onegreatjoke: forgive me for being dense, but I'm unclear about what you wrote. --evrik ^(talk) 22:05, 25 July 2023 (UTC)
• @Onegreatjoke: The nominator hasn't been active since the start of the month; if the issues haven't or can't be addressed, should the nomination be closed? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 13:19, 19 August 2023 (UTC)

I'll wait to see if he comes back. Onegreatjoke (talk) 18:56, 20 August 2023 (UTC)

It's been over a week since my comment and the nominator hasn't returned. Marking for closure. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 00:13, 28 August 2023 (UTC)