Template:Did you know nominations/Cinetorhynchus rigens
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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 00:18, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
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Cinetorhynchus rigens
... that the dancing shrimp Cinetorhynchus rigens often takes refuge underneath a sea urchin or lives in association with a sea anemone?
- Reviewed: London Theatre Studio
Created by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self-nominated at 09:58, 13 December 2020 (UTC).
Hi Cwmhiraeth, review follows: Article created 6 December; article exceeds minimum length; article is well written and cited inline throughout to reliable sources; I didn't spot any overly close paraphrasing; hook is interesting, mentioned in the article; it might be my French but I can find no mention of it taking refuge beneath the Diadema antillarum in the DORIS source, only that it cohabite parfois (sometimes coexists/cohabits) with or is en présence (in the presence) of it? - Dumelow (talk) 12:49, 13 December 2020 (UTC)
- @Dumelow: Thanks for the review. "avec lequel elle cohabite parfois" seems to imply that it is protected by the association but I have probably gone too far in ALT0, so am suggesting ALT1. Look at this picture. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 14:42, 13 December 2020 (UTC)
Diadema antillarum with shrimps sheltering underneath the spines
- ALT1 ... that the dancing shrimp Cinetorhynchus rigens is often associated with sea urchins or sea anemones?
Yep, that's fine for me - Dumelow (talk) 15:36, 13 December 2020 (UTC)
Hi, I came by to promote this. I'm wondering if we can call it by its common name, or else we need an inline cite on the sentence explaining why it is called a dancing shrimp.- ALT2: ... that the Atlantic dancing shrimp is often associated with sea urchins or sea anemones? Yoninah (talk) 21:44, 13 December 2020 (UTC)
- I am happy with ALT2. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:39, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
- ... but can you delay promotion for a couple of days as I have found a new source and may want to make some alterations. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:50, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
