Template:Did you know nominations/Chilocorus orbus
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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 03:24, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
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Chilocorus orbus, Quadraspidiotus juglansregiae
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- ... that the twice-stabbed lady beetle preys on the walnut scale? Source: "Two predators—the twicestabbed lady beetle, Chilocorus orbus, and another small beetle, Cybocephalus californicus —often occur in large numbers and may control low numbers of the walnut scale."
- Reviewed: Far future in fiction
- Comment: This QPQ is a two article hook
Created/expanded by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self-nominated at 06:21, 20 October 2020 (UTC).
Hi Cwmhiraeth, review follows:
- Chilocorus orbus: 5x expansion from 15 October; article is well written and cited inline throughout; I am not familiar with some of the sources used but happy to AGF that they are reliable for this field; I didn't find any issues with overly close paraphrasing form the sources used; my only issue with this article is that the fact that it is named for the red slashes on its back is not cited, I also like to stick quite rigidly to WP:LEAD in that it shouldn't contain information not in the main text
- Quadraspidiotus juglansregiae: new article created 18 October; meets length requirement; article is well written and cited inline throughout; sources all look to be reliable; no issues with overly close paraphrasing found;
- Hook: I find the hook interesting based on the common names of the insects, if desired more interest might be generated by mentioning the "alligator-like" larvae which also prey on the walnut scale; hook is mentioned in both articles and checks out to the source cited; a double QPQ has been provided. Looks good to me. If the minor issue with the ladybird article (source for common naming) can be sorted then this is can be ticked - Dumelow (talk) 10:58, 20 October 2020 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that both the adults and the alligator-like larvae of the twice-stabbed lady beetle prey on the walnut scale?
- @Dumelow: I have rearranged the lead but not removed the citations, although I agree with you in principle. The four citations in a row were provided by the clever Qbugbot which created the stub, and I don't want to write a taxonomy section. I have added ALT1. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:38, 26 October 2020 (UTC)
Thanks Cwmhiraeth, ALT0 and ALT1 are both approved - Dumelow (talk) 06:59, 26 October 2020 (UTC)
- @Dumelow: I have rearranged the lead but not removed the citations, although I agree with you in principle. The four citations in a row were provided by the clever Qbugbot which created the stub, and I don't want to write a taxonomy section. I have added ALT1. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:38, 26 October 2020 (UTC)
