Template:Did you know nominations/Charlez ar Gall

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The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 18:46, 21 September 2023 (UTC)

Charlez ar Gall, Chanig ar Gall

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• Charlez ar Gall
• Chanig ar Gall

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• ... that Charlez ar Gall and his wife Chanig ar Gall were known as pioneers of Breton-language broadcasting? Source: "Avec Charlez ar Gall, elle a été du temps de l'ORTF une pionnère de la radio et de la télévision en langue bretonne./With Charlez ar Gall, she was a pioneer in radio and television in the Breton language during the ORTF era."/"Avec son mari, Charlez, lui-même disparu en 2010, elle a été, du temps de l'ORTF, une pionnière de la radio et de la télévision en langue bretonne./With her husband, Charlez, who himself died in 2010, she was, during the era of ORTF, a pioneer of radio and television in the Breton language."
  • ALT1: ... that Charlez ar Gall and his wife Chanig ar Gall were pioneers of Breton-language broadcasting? Source: Same as ALT0
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Carmen García (politician) and Template:Did you know nominations/Erice van Leuven
  • Comment: For reference: Chanig ar Gall was moved to draftspace on 5 September at 21:59. Although Chanig was the first created (for WIR), I'm putting Charlez first in the hook because his article's longer.

Moved to mainspace by Miraclepine (talk). Self-nominated at 20:51, 12 September 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Charlez ar Gall; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook eligibility:

• Cited:
• Interesting: - n

QPQ: Done.

Overall: @Miraclepine: Good article, but the hook isn't really all that interesting to me (I'm not a fan of pioneer hooks really). Could a new be proposed? Onegreatjoke (talk) 01:36, 18 September 2023 (UTC)

@Onegreatjoke: How about these? These are the only ones I got that fit both people, but I am open to a hook with just one of the two.

• ALT2: ... that Chanig ar Gall joined her husband Charlez ar Gall in Breton-language broadcasting after learning the language itself? "Elle avait d’ailleurs appris le breton pour pouvoir participer aux premières émissions en breton aux côtés de son mari/She had also learned Breton to be able to participate in the first Breton broadcasts alongside her husband"
• ALT3: ... that Charlez ar Gall and his wife Chanig ar Gall were the host and announcer of Breiz o veva, the first Breton-language magazine television programme? "Il ... anime ensuite Breiz o Veva à partir de 1971./He ... then hosted Breiz o Veva from 1971."/"En 1971, il crée un magazine de 15 minutes, Breizh o veva (La Bretagne vivante) ... « Son épouse Channig était la speakerine de l'émission », raconte Fanch Broudig, qui travaille alors avec lui./In 1971, he created a 15-minute magazine, Breizh o veva (Living Brittany) ... “His wife Channig was the announcer of the show ,” says Fanch Broudig, who worked with him at the time."

ミラP@Miraclepine 02:08, 18 September 2023 (UTC)

New hooks are good. Onegreatjoke (talk) 02:11, 21 September 2023 (UTC)