Template:Did you know nominations/Benjamín Galván Gómez

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The result was: promoted by Sven Manguard Wha? 04:47, 9 April 2014 (UTC)

Benjamín Galván Gómez

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• ... that former Nuevo Laredo, Mexico mayor Benjamín Galván Gómez was recently kidnapped and killed?

• Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Battle of the Sittang Bend

Created by ComputerJA (talk). Self nominated at 02:08, 6 April 2014 (UTC).

• Date, size and QPQ check out. Foreign language hook accepted in good faith. —Vensatry _(Ping) 15:36, 7 April 2014 (UTC)

I pushed this to Prep Area 3, but pulled it because an IP proposed an alternate wording that I think is a significant improvement.

ALT1: "... that Benjamín Galván Gómez, the former mayor of Nuevo Laredo, Mexico, was recently kidnapped and killed?"

ComputerJA and Vensatry, please let me know your thoughts on the ALT. Sven Manguard Wha? 19:33, 8 April 2014 (UTC)

Yes, I support the ALT blurb. ComputerJA (☎ • ✎) 22:18, 8 April 2014 (UTC)

ALT1 sounds much better. —Vensatry _(Ping) 04:26, 9 April 2014 (UTC)