Template:Did you know nominations/Battle of Himara

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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:36, 20 February 2012 (UTC)

Battle of Himara

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... that Benito Mussolini admitted that one of the causes of the Italian defeat at the Battle of Himara was the high morale of the Greek troops?

Created/expanded by Alexikoua (talk). Self nom at 23:27, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

Date and length verified and the article is referenced throughout. I have a slight problem with the hook, though. I can't access the page in Google Books, but the actual quote seems to be "Mussolini, after the capture of Himara by the Greeks, does not doubt the contribution of high morale to the victory of the enemy". Now, "contribution" is one thing, "decisive factor" is another. I think you should tweak the hook and wording in the article to reflect that. — Toдor Boжinov — 09:32, 14 February 2012 (UTC)

I've rephrased hook and article in complete accordance with the citation.Alexikoua (talk) 21:03, 14 February 2012 (UTC)

I'm happy with the current wording and I'm verifying the submission :) — Toдor Boжinov — 13:16, 15 February 2012 (UTC)

Needs to have a QPQ review added. Miyagawa (talk) 18:48, 15 February 2012 (UTC)

:Reviewed: J. Murray Mitchell.Alexikoua (talk) 20:40, 20 February 2012 (UTC)