Template:Did you know nominations/Aries (rocket)

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 17:23, 14 January 2018 (UTC)

Aries (rocket)

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Aries launch in 1991

... that the "Fat Albert" sounding rocket had its name changed to Aries (pictured) because the Naval Research Laboratory considered it "more dignified"?
Source: "The Naval Research Laboratory asked Robert D. Arritt of its Space Science Division to choose a more dignified name." [1]

Reviewed: Fugitive dust
Comment: Note that DYKcheck will not show a 5x expansion, as I had to clear a cut-and-paste copyvio. The previous good version was 301 characters, needing 1505 for a 5x expansion.

5x expanded by The Bushranger (talk). Self-nominated at 23:44, 10 December 2017 (UTC).

Hook is cited to A Dictionary of the Space Age, a cached version of which is here. Article is long enough, and obviously free of copyvios; image is PD. In terms of expansion, effectively you have done the equivalent of deleting the original article per CSD G12 and rewriting it from scratch - can one of our DYK stalwarts like Yoninah confirm this is okay? Ritchie333 ^(talk) ^(cont) 20:54, 11 December 2017 (UTC)

(edit conflict) Hi The Bushranger, review follows:five times expansion from this version confirmed (as per supplementary rule A4 copyvio text does not count for article size. NB: I confirmed the now deleted revisions of article to be copyvio of this page by checking deleted revisions; article is well written and cited to reliable sources; hook is interesting and cited in the article, I couldn't access the page cited but I will AGF it backs up the fact; QPQ has been done; hook image is listed as PD on Commons but the link (to a USAF website) no longer has the image, happy to AGF on this also - Dumelow (talk) 21:20, 11 December 2017 (UTC)

Sorry, I had the edit window open whilst reviewing and we conflicted. The copyvio text is discounted per rule A4, I think: "Fivefold expansion is calculated from the previously existing article, no matter how bad it was (copyvios are an exception)". Cheers - Dumelow (talk) 21:22, 11 December 2017 (UTC)

The book source is online via Google Books so you can turn the AGF tick into a fully-fledged green one. Ritchie333 ^(talk) ^(cont) 21:24, 11 December 2017 (UTC)