Template:Did you know nominations/Ann Howard (author)
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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 20:09, 21 December 2022 (UTC)
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Ann Howard (author)
- ... that author Ann Howard interviewed more than 100 Australians about their experiences as child evacuees sent inland during World War II when a Japanese invasion seemed imminent? Source: "The kids compelled to go to bush for safety's sake", The Australian (14 November 2015) — via Gale OneFile.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/OneLove
- Comment: Expansion started on November 26.
5x expanded by Cielquiparle (talk). Self-nominated at 23:49, 2 December 2022 (UTC).
: excellent rewrite and fivefold expansion of this article! Clearly meets the 1,500 character minimum for prose. Both the hook fact and article prose is written in an impartial tone and include citations to source that support their content. Hook fact is intriguing and is present in the article with the same source you have provided here. This analysis by Earwig's copyvio detector doesn't show any issues such as close paraphrasing. A surface-level spotcheck with the prose of the lead and hook fact that have citations to EBSCO/Gale/etc. sources also looks good to me. One small wording suggestion, if appropriate - maybe "who were" could be omitted for a quicker read? Best, Bridget (talk) 20:28, 3 December 2022 (UTC)
- Onegreatjoke (talk) 21:08, 4 December 2022 (UTC)
- @Bridget: Thanks for the review and suggestion! I have now deleted "who were" from the hook above. Cielquiparle (talk) 04:49, 5 December 2022 (UTC)