Template:Did you know nominations/Angela Santomero
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The result was: promoted by — Crisco 1492 (talk) 05:26, 11 July 2012 (UTC)
Angela Santomero
[edit]... that Angela Santomero created, wrote, and produced two important TV shows, Blue's Clues and Super Why!?
- Reviewed: Omar Elabdellaoui
Created/expanded by Figureskatingfan (talk). Self nom at 16:33, 28 June 2012 (UTC)
A hook needs to take a passive tone, and "important" looks too dubious. I would prefer using "children's TV show" over "important". --George Ho (talk) 09:17, 30 June 2012 (UTC)
ALT1:... that two children's TV shows, Blue's Clues and Super Why!, were created, produced, and written by Angela Santomero?
- I'm good with ALT1 as the hook. Christine (Figureskatingfan) (talk) 17:47, 30 June 2012 (UTC)
- I think it's desirable to have the article link early rather than late, and I prefer the order of the original hook, which is a frequently used construction. I did, however, reverse the order of the shows since Super Why! has an exclamation mark in its formal title (which I've added to earlier hooks), and I thought it best to avoid having a "!?" at the end of the hook:
- ALT2: ... that Angela Santomero created, wrote, and produced two children's TV shows, Super Why! and Blue's Clues? —BlueMoonset (talk) 12:27, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
- ALT2 is fine, too. Christine (Figureskatingfan) (talk) 15:02, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
- I think it's desirable to have the article link early rather than late, and I prefer the order of the original hook, which is a frequently used construction. I did, however, reverse the order of the shows since Super Why! has an exclamation mark in its formal title (which I've added to earlier hooks), and I thought it best to avoid having a "!?" at the end of the hook:
- I'm good with ALT1 as the hook. Christine (Figureskatingfan) (talk) 17:47, 30 June 2012 (UTC)
Needs full review now that hook is settled. BlueMoonset (talk) 14:35, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
Good to go with ALT2. Long enough, new enough and within policy. Hook is good. Article is referenced, and the text has nothing of concern. Moswento talky 09:25, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
- Striking hooks that were not approved by reviewer. BlueMoonset (talk) 12:06, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
