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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cielquiparle (talk) 01:41, 6 September 2023 (UTC)

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Amphitheatrum Johnsonianum

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Amphitheatrum Johnsonianum
Amphitheatrum Johnsonianum

Created by Jengod (talk). Self-nominated at 23:36, 30 July 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Amphitheatrum Johnsonianum; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

  • Comment: A more interesting hook might be ... that Amphitheatrum Johnsonianum depicts Andrew Johnson as the Roman emperor Nero, watching the slaughter of martyrs in a Roman arena? Acroterion (talk) 01:35, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
  • Further comment: The arena in question isn't specifically the Colosseum, it might need to be reworded in the lede to be less precise. Acroterion (talk) 01:41, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: @Jengod:Impressively-researched article, but the hook is a little flat. I've suggested something that more directly addresses the content. AGF on paraphrasing and copyright, given the extensive referencing and size of the article. Acroterion (talk) 02:14, 31 July 2023 (UTC)

  • I think the alt is great. Thanks for the suggestion. I changed Coliseum in the lede to arena; I was thinking of asking WikiProject Greek and Roman people to review but I wasn't sure if it was like asking if a Looney Toon was historically accurate LOL. jengod (talk) 02:33, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
    Well, I'm an architect, so it's in my field of competence! If you don't mind, I'll, finish up tomororow, I'm about to sign off. Acroterion (talk) 03:08, 31 July 2023 (UTC)

@jengod and Acroterion: Unfortunately, reviewers can't approve the hooks they propose, and it looks like this one falls afoul of WP:DYKFICTION. Could another hook be found? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 04:19, 18 August 2023 (UTC)

Clearly I’ve been away from DYK for too long. I guess I’ll need to withdraw my approval, and if I suggest another hook, to recuse. Acroterion (talk) 04:37, 18 August 2023 (UTC)

Sure thing. Here are three options; let me know if you want others or need citation elaboration theleekycauldron; I think I like alt4 best, then alt2 and alt3, but whatever works for you guys is fine w me :

  • ALT4 ... that Andrew Johnson, a self-proclaimed plebeian, is crowned emperor in Thomas Nast's Amphitheatrum Johnsonianum?
    • source: Browne, Stephen Howard (2008). "Andrew Johnson and the Politics of Character". In Medhurst, Martin J. (ed.). Before the Rhetorical Presidency. Presidential Rhetoric Series (No. 19). College Station: Texas A&M University Press. pp. 194–212. for transcript of inaugural address, I can get other cites for plebeian if need be

jengod (talk) 04:50, 18 August 2023 (UTC)

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