Template:Did you know nominations/Almira Hollander Pitman
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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:06, 27 December 2020 (UTC)
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Almira Hollander Pitman
... that Massachusetts-born suffragist Almira Hollander Pitman was instrumental in working for women's suffrage in Hawaii after visiting the islands with her Hawaiian husband?
- Reviewed: Berge equilibrium
Created by Megalibrarygirl (talk) and KAVEBEAR (talk). Nominated by KAVEBEAR (talk) at 21:56, 11 December 2020 (UTC).
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... that Massachusetts-born activist Almira Hollander Pitman was instrumental in working for women's suffrage in Hawaii after visiting the islands with her husband?
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- When you say it that way, it's not a very strong hook. Women in Red would ask: Why do we need to mention her husband? Then there's almost no hook left. Yoninah (talk) 19:23, 24 December 2020 (UTC)
- How about: ALT2: ... that Massachusetts-born activist Almira Hollander Pitman was given credit for the passage of a bill for women's suffrage in Hawaii? Megalibrarygirl (talk) 19:27, 24 December 2020 (UTC)
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