Template:Did you know nominations/Alliance of Palestinian Forces
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The result was: promoted by 4meter4 (talk) 20:16, 18 January 2016 (UTC)
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Alliance of Palestinian Forces
[edit]... that in rejection of the 1993 Oslo Accords, Hamas and nine other groups formed the Alliance of Palestinian Forces?
Created by Soman (talk). Self-nominated at 10:26, 12 December 2015 (UTC).
- Length, history and reference verified. However I think the hook is a little dull. May I suggest:
- ALT1: ... that the Alliance of Palestinian Forces, formed in 1993 by Hamas and nine other groups who rejected the Oslo Accords, was marginalized by the time of the Second Intifada in 2000?
Daniel Case (talk) 06:30, 16 January 2016 (UTC)
- checked (AGF to non-English sources) the second phrase of ALT1 "...was marginalized by the time of the Second Intifada in 2000?". I also much prefer this hook as I recently promoted a very similar hook at Template:Did you know nominations/Palestinian Liberation Front (Abu Nidal Ashqar wing). Can't understand why these weren't merged into one hook! Jolly Ω Janner 20:59, 16 January 2016 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that the Alliance of Palestinian Forces, formed in 1993 by Hamas and nine other groups who rejected the Oslo Accords, was marginalized by the time of the Second Intifada in 2000?