Template:Did you know nominations/Abd al-Karim al-Jundi

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 11:48, 12 October 2012 (UTC)

Abd al-Karim al-Jundi

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... that Abd al-Karim al-Jundi's tenure as minister of agrarian reform of Syria saw rapid state appropriation of agrarian land from traditional landowners?

Reviewed: Jest (horse)

Created/expanded by Zozo2kx (talk), Al Ameer son (talk). Nominated by Zozo2kx (talk) at 05:15, 26 September 2012 (UTC)

New: Good. Length: 3023. Policy: AGFing on plagiarism. Hook: Length good, but I think it could probably be rephrased a bit. Maybe something like Alt1: "... that Abd al-Karim al-Jundi presided over the state appropriation of Syrian farm land from its traditional owners after becoming the minister of agrarian reform?" QPQ: Good. Abyssal (talk) 15:52, 9 October 2012 (UTC)

ALT1 works for me! thanks for the review! Yazan (talk) 02:39, 10 October 2012 (UTC)

This should be good to go, then. Abyssal (talk) 20:06, 11 October 2012 (UTC)