Talk:Your Love (Nicki Minaj song)/GA3

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 14:19, 15 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you :)!--(CA)Giacobbe (talk) 20:03, 15 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Review

First comments

Lead

"however when the song" >> "but when the song"

Done

I think that the information about the remixes doesn't belong to the background section. That paragraph goes better on composition.

Nothing else by now.

Done

—Hahc21 ^{[TALK][CONTRIBS]} 20:19, 15 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Add. comments

I changed the picture of Lennox. I hope you don't mind.
The rest of the article seems to be in good shape. I'll be checking the references late.

—Hahc21 ^{[TALK][CONTRIBS]} 21:12, 15 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, great!--(CA)Giacobbe (talk) 21:58, 15 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

More comments

Lead

Billboard Hot 100 should be wikilinked, since its the 1st time you mention it.
Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs, the same as above.

Done

Background

"After being mixed differently and rewriting some of the lyrics", confusing tense. Better if wrote: "and some lyrics rewritten,"

Done

Ok, those are the last i see as prose. I'll check the refs. —Hahc 21 16:24, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Alright!--(CA)Giacobbe (talk) 17:16, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

References

It's not necessary, but the Ref No.9, Entertainment Weekly, should be formatted with {{cite news}} ot {{cite journal}} for better order. But i repeat, is not necessary.
All fine. Checked.

—Hahc 21 17:35, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Alright perfect! How much stuff left to go?--(CA)Giacobbe (talk) 17:37, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Nothing else =). —Hahc 21 17:45, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Verdict

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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—Hahc 21 17:45, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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