Talk:Worthington Brewery/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 04:49, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):
b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Infobox

No issues

Lead

The Worthington Brewery (Worthington & Co.) was founded by William Worthington in the English Midlands town of Burton upon Trent in 1761. → Try and expand history with information in article Done

It's a small article, I don't want to overwhelm the intro, but I've added some more history to the first paragraph.Farrtj (talk) 19:46, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Overview

Put this section below the "History" section Done

History

Fair use rationale needed for portrait of Worthington Done
Fix disambiguation issue with "cooper" according to this Done

Worthington White Shield

William Worthington's White Shield (5.6% ABV) is available bottle conditioned and in casks.[18] → "William Worthington's White Shield" should not be bolded Done

References

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~~Referencing is definitely my weak point. Could I ask you to be a little more specific about the issues regarding referencing? Farrtj (talk) 19:54, 23 June 2012 (UTC)~~[reply]

Referencing sorted out.Farrtj (talk) 02:46, 24 June 2012 (UTC) Done[reply]

After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put it on hold at this time. There are some prose issues among other things that are keeping this article from reaching good article status. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or address issues which you believe do not affect good article status. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 18:05, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

All issues have now been addressed, so I feel confident passing this article. Congratulations and keep up the good work! Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 04:13, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]