Talk:World Federation of Music Therapy

Suggestions for improvement

Further to a query by joefac on my talk page, I'm adding a few suggestions for improving the article here.

• The biggest problem is copyright violations, text cannot be copied and pasted from websites unless the appropriate permission is given. Persistant violations of copyright may end up in an account being blocked from editing. Feel free to re-add the information, but in your own words please!
  • I've removed the mission section as copyvio from about page
  • Removed members section as copyvio from home page.
  • Removed lead as copyvio of home page
  • Removed Leadership sentence as copyvio from leadership page.
  • Removed part of history section as copyvio of home page
• Per WP:EL, external links should not be in the body of the article - only in an info box or in a specific section at the end. For example, the guidelines and policies pdfs are not really appropriate for wikipedia.
• Level 2 headings (== not ===) for history section would be helpful, also the mission section if/when it is replaced
• Writing about companies can be difficult, as the article should not be written like an advertisment. It should be written objectively including third party commentary on the company, rather than lists of things the company offers. I'd question the need for the Activities and Projects section at all.
• Adding in some third party commentary would be very helpful. Google news and Google books is a good place to start.

Hopefully, that will give you a few ideas as to improvements for the article. Any more questions, do come along to my talk page Worm^TT 12:40, 22 February 2011 (UTC)