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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Woollen Gymnasium/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 22:29, 14 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

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1. Prose  Pass

2. Verifiability  Pass

3. Depth of Coverage  Pass

4. Neutral  Pass

5. Stable  Pass

6. Illustrations  Pass

7. Miscellaneous  Pass

Comments

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  • This is really nitpicky, so this is optional, but for stuff like "twenty–six seasons", MOS:HYPHEN would suggest a hyphen, not an endash. MOS:DASH isn't really a GA-thing, so I'm not going to require dash fixes, except for a few special cases involving reference formatting.
  • "fund-raise" is one word usually, with no hyphen
  • Link fencing
  • "elected to build (the Tin Can) in 1923" - Are the paranthesis really necessary?
  • Go ahead and link President Roosevelt, since there were two of them, and non-American readers may not know the chronology enough to know which one is referred to. You can then remove the link to FDR in the next section
  • For the dimensions, can the {{convert}} template be added with meters?
  • "The main gym floor will gave room for two varsity basketball courts" - Remove "will"
  • Link limestone
  • "School president Frank Porter Graham" - I'm not sure that School should be capitalized in this usage.
  • "As of the conclusion of the 2019–20, Woollen" - I think you're missing the word season in here.
  • Link Habitat for Humanity

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  • Create a further reading section and move Powell there, he's not used as a ref.
  • In the short refs, you have a Wade 1962, but in the long refs, there's a Wade 1961 but not Wade 1962. Which date is correct?

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  • In the infobox, you state that is was renovated in 2004 and 2010, but the 2010 renovation isn't mentioned in the article.

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Looks good. Passing. Hog Farm (talk) 15:19, 16 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]