Talk:Wolf & I/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 08:25, 23 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi there! I'm Cartoon network freak and I'm going to review this GAN for possible GA submission.

Lead

Connect the two opening sentences
and RCA Records. It was issued as a CD single, featuring two other singles from the eponymous album. → and RCA Records, with the recording being issued as a CD single, featuring two other singles from the eponymous album.
You use the word "track" two consecutive times; try to change it
critics → music critics + link to music journalism
called it among the best on the parent album → called it one of the highlights on the parent album
released to → released onto
2010, in → remove comma
was performed live → was sung live; word repetition

Background and composition

a wolf pack; → end sentence here
stated "it's the type of erotic fairytale [Welch] would sell her kneecaps for". → stated that "it's the type of erotic fairytale [Welch] would sell her kneecaps for".
claimed "the → claimed that "the
compared it to → compared "Wolf & I" to
described it → described the recording
You use the word "described" two times in-a-row here
stated how → remove "how"
adding how → adding that

Critical reception

called it a "sweet → called the recording a "sweet
album songs → you use the word "song" consecutively
stating the → stating that the
You use the word "stated" two times in-a-row here
stated "however → stated that "however

Promotion

single "Sun of a Gun" → add comma before "Sun of a Gun"
uploaded to → uploaded onto
account → channel
in support of the release of Oh Land → in order to support the release of Oh Land
a drummer. → a drummer.[12]
You use the word "perform" two times in-a-row here
The blogger behind Alfitude.com → Kieron Tyler from website Alfitude
stating "she → stating that "she

Credits and personnel

from Oh Land liner notes → from the liner notes of Oh Land
You may want to list the recording studios

Release history

Use ''wikitable unsortable plainrowheaders''
Use ''!scope="row"|'' for United States
Use a "/" (slash) for listing the labels

References

alfitude.com (Ref#13) → Alfitude

Outcome of GAN review

On hold for 7 days. Apart from some word repetitions and minor grammar issues, this article is well-written and referenced. Good job, Carbrera! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:06, 23 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Cartoon network freak: All finished. Thanks for the review as always. Carbrera (talk) 22:16, 23 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Carbrera: Passing. Congrats! Cartoon network freak (talk) 05:12, 24 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.