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Wolf & I has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: July 24, 2016. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 08:25, 23 July 2016 (UTC)
Hi there! I'm Cartoon network freak and I'm going to review this GAN for possible GA submission.
Lead
[edit]- Connect the two opening sentences
- and RCA Records. It was issued as a CD single, featuring two other singles from the eponymous album. → and RCA Records, with the recording being issued as a CD single, featuring two other singles from the eponymous album.
- You use the word "track" two consecutive times; try to change it
- critics → music critics + link to music journalism
- called it among the best on the parent album → called it one of the highlights on the parent album
- released to → released onto
- 2010, in → remove comma
- was performed live → was sung live; word repetition
Background and composition
[edit]- a wolf pack; → end sentence here
- stated "it's the type of erotic fairytale [Welch] would sell her kneecaps for". → stated that "it's the type of erotic fairytale [Welch] would sell her kneecaps for".
- claimed "the → claimed that "the
- compared it to → compared "Wolf & I" to
- described it → described the recording
- You use the word "described" two times in-a-row here
- stated how → remove "how"
- adding how → adding that
Critical reception
[edit]- called it a "sweet → called the recording a "sweet
- album songs → you use the word "song" consecutively
- stating the → stating that the
- You use the word "stated" two times in-a-row here
- stated "however → stated that "however
Promotion
[edit]- single "Sun of a Gun" → add comma before "Sun of a Gun"
- uploaded to → uploaded onto
- account → channel
- in support of the release of Oh Land → in order to support the release of Oh Land
- a drummer. → a drummer.[12]
- You use the word "perform" two times in-a-row here
- The blogger behind Alfitude.com → Kieron Tyler from website Alfitude
- stating "she → stating that "she
Credits and personnel
[edit]- from Oh Land liner notes → from the liner notes of Oh Land
- You may want to list the recording studios
Release history
[edit]- Use ''wikitable unsortable plainrowheaders''
- Use ''!scope="row"|'' for United States
- Use a "/" (slash) for listing the labels
References
[edit]- alfitude.com (Ref#13) → Alfitude
Outcome of GAN review
[edit]On hold for 7 days. Apart from some word repetitions and minor grammar issues, this article is well-written and referenced. Good job, Carbrera! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:06, 23 July 2016 (UTC)
- @Cartoon network freak: All finished. Thanks for the review as always. Carbrera (talk) 22:16, 23 July 2016 (UTC)
- @Carbrera: Passing. Congrats! Cartoon network freak (talk) 05:12, 24 July 2016 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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