Talk:William Kincaid (flutist)

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Close Paraphrasing problem

(moved discussion here, from User talk page.)

Is the issue of paraphrasing fixed? I checked with Earwig's copyvio tool [1] Thanks Triplecaña (talk) 08:20, 7 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Triplecaña: Thanks for asking – I had forgotten about this article. The first paragraph is lifted pretty closely from the newspaper obit. The second paragraph is lifted pretty closely from the Stokowski reference. And the rest of the article is basically unchanged since the January tagging (except for copied lists of non-notable names that I'll remove). So, I agree with Earwig that the tag should remain until there's a more extensive rewrite that doesn't match the copyrighted sources so closely. Thanks again. —Patrug (talk) 08:26, 8 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

This entry needs expanding

The Curtis section is too short. A student list and recording list would be helpful. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2A02:8070:DAD:4600:C442:5F12:9564:56E1 (talk) 14:41, 21 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Added Sections

Thinking that more sections are necessary to expand on the American School and Curtis relevancy. -- Blanketburrito (talk) 15:22, 13 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]