Talk:Washington Park Historic District (Albany, New York)/GA1
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Reviewer: Andrewmc123 16:29, 21 November 2010 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- A few more references needed, particularly in the 'Monuments' section.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Prose
- The first sentence of the lead needs rephrasing, especially at the phrase "is that city's premier park". Perhaps change 'that' to 'the'.
- In the second paragraph in the lead, the phrase 'grace the streets' is possibly verging on WP:WTW in the Manual of Style.
- In the section 'Cemetery and parade grounds' I suggest making some of the sentences slightly shorter, particularly the sentence beginning "In 1800 the land west of Knox Street...".
- "A few such as 694 and 710 Madison..." - A few what?
References
- Are there any more references for the Marinus Willet Memorial?
- Just wanted to say that I've fixed some issues, and I'm working on others. Thanks for putting this on hold for a week, it may take that long for me to get to it.
--Gyrobo (talk) 19:50, 21 November 2010 (UTC)