Talk:Warlocked/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Dr Salvus (talk · contribs) 18:23, 29 March 2022 (UTC)

Hey. I've decided that this would be my first GA review ever. I'm gonna review this tomorrow. Dr Salvus 18:23, 29 March 2022 (UTC)

Criteria	Notes	Result
(a) (prose)	The reviewer has left no comments here	Pass
(b) (MoS)	The reviewer has left no comments here	Pass

Verifiable with no original research:

Criteria	Notes	Result
(a) (references)	The reviewer has left no comments here	Pass
(b) (citations to reliable sources)	The reviewer has left no comments here	Pass
(c) (original research)	The reviewer has left no comments here	Pass
(d) (copyvio and plagiarism)	The reviewer has left no comments here	Pass

Broad in its coverage:

Criteria	Notes	Result
(a) (major aspects)	The reviewer has left no comments here	Pass
(b) (focused)	The reviewer has left no comments here	Pass

Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.

Notes	Result
The reviewer has left no comments here	Pass

Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.

Notes	Result
The reviewer has left no comments here	Pass

Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:

Criteria	Notes	Result
(a) (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales)	The reviewer has left no comments here	Pass
(b) (appropriate use with suitable captions)	The reviewer has left no comments here	Pass

Result

Result	Notes
Pass	The reviewer has left no comments here

Discussion

@GamerPro64:, you've litteraly written an excellent article. Unfortunatley, not being a native speaker, I'll have to review the grammar tomorrow (and I'll be helped by a friend who's got a better English). It's my first review, so I apologise for possible errors. Do remember to add a caption as the photo doesn't have it. Dr Salvus 21:42, 29 March 2022 (UTC)

What do you mean the photo does have a caption. GamerPro64 21:47, 29 March 2022 (UTC)

GamerPro64, oh sorry, hadn't seen it Dr Salvus 21:48, 29 March 2022 (UTC)

@GamerPro64 today, I'm very sick (I may have contracted Covid), so won't be able to review the grammar for a few days. Dr Salvus 16:32, 30 March 2022 (UTC)

@GamerPro64, I'm fine enough to do this and I'm 99,9% asyntomatic. These are my friend's grammatical corrections.

• Music for Warlocked was composed by Jeroen Tel. -> The music for Warlocked was composed by Jeroen Tel.
• A sequel was planned for the Game Boy Advance titled Wizards but was cancelled. -> A sequel was planned for the Game Boy Advance titled Wizards but it was cancelled.
• The studio later went on to make unrelated games for other consoles [...] -> The studio continued to make unrelated games for other consoles [...]

That's what I've got. Dr Salvus 19:11, 2 April 2022 (UTC)

All done. GamerPro64 04:06, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

@Dr Salvus Thank you for your GA Review, I appreciate you resolving the issue of the previous review I left. PerryPerryD Talk To Me 19:54, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments from BlackShadowG

Hi, @GamerPro64:, I have translated the entire article into Chinese and nominated a GAC there as well. Our editors found that the "Development and release" section is too short, I think these two sources [1][2] may be helpful in writing this section. --BlackShadowG (talk) 04:16, 3 April 2022 (UTC)