Talk:WNUV/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 05:15, 8 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Might review this within one week IDK. ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 05:15, 8 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Nice work on the changes! Pass. ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 22:36, 13 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Copyvio check

Earwig is happy.

File(s)

Both files are relevant and copyright-free.

Prose

In the lead, remove "(SSA)" as it is never used again.
In the first sentence of § Early years: Super TV, wikilink Baltimore.
In the second sentence, is said company really that unimportant that it not be named?
Is it possible to mention when (if known) Peter and John Fellowship announced their bid, for consistency.
I would wikilink newsmagazine (IDK if I am dumb but I have never heard of that term until now).
Wikilink cable TV.
"general-entertainment independent" – wikilink independent to independent station.
I know the second point is informatively sufficient but "economic factors" itself is a bit vague IMO.
Just curious, why does it say Salditch was "preparing for life" instead of something like preparing for the future of WNUV?
Wikilink NBC.
For one sentence there are a lot of commas. How about "The FCC approved of their purchase by way of ABRY Communications in March 1989, and" to improve the flow?
"antennas as an STV station" – recommend wikilinking and writing out satellite television.
- That's S for subscription and it's introduced earlier
I know this is hardly relevant but is it possible to provide a short, few word explanation on why WBAL-TV declined to carry the show?
- I don't think that'd be relevant to this article.
Wikilink Milwaukee.
"attempt to put up roadblocks" – recommend "set up" for improved formality (I am a pedant).
"low-power UHF station" – also write out and wikilink ultra high frequency with the abbreviation in parentheses.
On what grounds did UPN contest?
"became a front page issue" is informal – recommend rephrasing.
"was late to sign an agreement with The CW" – hmm, how about "with the network" or "with it" etc. since The CW was just mentioned?
"to start airing digital simulcasts" – I would wikilink simulcast.
Wikilink OFDM.
Wikilink ultra-HD.

Other items linked or revised. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 06:09, 12 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Refs

Passes spotcheck on refs 1, 6, 19, 25, 38, 42 and 64.

Others

Recommend template:use American English (optional)

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