Talk:Unusual You/GA1

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Reviewer: Blackjacks101 (talk) 23:58, 31 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hey I will be reviewing this article soon =). Nice to see another Britney getting worked on!--Blackjacks101 (talk) 23:58, 31 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Great Job with the links, just one problem. Your first reference is to prove the release of the song in Australia and New Zealand but all I see is it proving the release in New Zealand. Is there something I'm missing? If I'm not you will have to find a reliable source saying it was released in Australia. More will be coming, though don't expect many errors though! =D--Blackjacks101 (talk) 01:20, 1 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Lol just a few little things

The song was written by Christian Karlsson, Henrik Jonback, Pontus Winnberg and Kasia Livingston, and produced by Bloodshy & Avant for Spears' sixth studio album, Circus (2008). – that is confusing....Christian Karlsson and Pontus Winnberg are part of Bloodshy & Avant but this makes it sound as if they are different and that Christian and Pontus didn’t produce the track, people may not be able to make that connection

"Unusual You" was written by Christian Karlsson and Pontus Winnberg from Bloodshy & Avant, as well as Kasia Livingston and Henrik Jonback, while being produced by Bloodshy & Avant. -This is kind of being picky but I find saying Bloodshy & Avant twice is kind of repetative why don't you state them last and then say "while being produced by the latter."

Done --ĈÞЯİŒ 1ооо 02:14, 1 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Reverted. You can't put Bloodshy & Avant last, they're the main writers of the song. Xwomanizerx (talk) 11:28, 1 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

That wasn't my edit. I only said "while being produced by the former two." --ĈÞЯİŒ 1ооо 12:51, 1 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The song was recorded by Spears at Conway Studios in Los Angeles, California, and was later mixed by Anders Hvenare and Bloodshy and Avant at Robotberget in Stockholm, Sweden. – you say that Anders Hvenare mixed the track as well, would that not make him a producer of the song?

Done --ĈÞЯİŒ 1ооо 02:14, 1 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Reverted. No, he isn't. He's just the mixer. Xwomanizerx (talk) 11:28, 1 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Overall pretty easy to review! But, you may find people that will send this to AfD since though it was released as a single it didn't chart where it was released, and where is charted on the Pop 100 isn't that notable. Then it also was never performed and never received a music video. Could it not be easily be put in the single section of Circus and still give all the neccessary information? I hope you understand my Point of View, I don't want to sound like I'm doubting your work, I just want you to be aware that the single isn't that notable and could very likely be sent to AfD.--Blackjacks101 (talk) 01:37, 1 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

This is a keep per WP:GNG. If it was for me though, this would be deleted in a second. Xwomanizerx (talk) 11:28, 1 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Note: I see that another editor that didn't nominate the article has stepped in without asking for permission. I will answer the concerns myself. Xwomanizerx (talk) 11:28, 1 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

We need permission to contribute to getting articles to GA status? --ĈÞЯİŒ 1ооо 22:06, 1 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

KK, now I understand, just though mixing was part of the producer's job that's all =D, how about my first comment about the reference?--Blackjacks101 (talk) 13:15, 1 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I added a reference for the Australian release. Xwomanizerx (talk) 10:52, 2 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

K...I'm passing =D--Blackjacks101 (talk) 14:55, 2 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]