Talk:USS Takanis Bay

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GA Review

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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 15:39, 7 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Claim this one. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 15:39, 7 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

on the west side of Yakobi Island in Alaska (near Sitka) Pipe Alaska to the Territory of Alaska.
which provided a force of 9,000 horsepower (6,700 kW) Link kW.

Infobox

Waterline length isn't included in the body same for the extreme width, installed power and the range.
"10,240 nmi (18,960 km; 11,780 mi)" link nmi.
"Takanis Bay, Yakobi Island, Alaska" Pipe Alaska to the Territory of Alaska.

That's it, for now, I will continue tomorrow. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 20:13, 8 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Did a bit, can't figure out how to wikilink inside of conversion templates unfortunately. Stikkyy t/c 05:42, 10 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I did it for you. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 12:39, 13 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

one on the fore, another on the aft.[3][2][4] Re-order the ref here.
carriers had been modified to carry 30 20 mm cannons Replace "30" with "thirty".
MC hull 1126, by Kaiser Shipbuilding Company, Vancouver, Washington. She was launched on 10 March 1944 I do not think we should use the "1944" here.
Until the end of hostilities with Japan on 15 August 1945 Pipe Japan with the Empire of Japan.
in two trips, she returned 1,300 servicemen from Hawaii to San Diego Same as Alaska pipe Hawaii with the Territory of Hawaii.
"Magic Carpet" fleet, and ordered to Tacoma, Washington Merge both links here.
She was sold on 29 June 1960 to Hyman-Michaels Company, Chicago, Illinois Split the Chicago, Illinois' link with a link to Chicago and the other one to Illinois.
for scrap and broken up in Portland, Oregon Link Portland, Oregon.
Why is there a "See also" section? Because it is totally empty.

"See also" sections contains the WWII portal bar, but the portal bar's pushed to the bottom of the page by images.

the constant turnover of pilots and aircraft for the purposes of training Remove "the purposes of".
a steady stream of carrier squadrons were trained onboard You mean "was"?
In this time period, between 24 May 1944 to 28 August 1945 Remove "time" here.
she qualified a record 2,509 pilots, and engaged in the most landings Remove the comma after pilots.

Sources

Y'Blood's book should have a Google Books' URL. Also, Google Books claim the book was made in 2012 and WorldCat claims it was 1999 made. Which one is correct?

Originally published in 1999, reprinted in another edition in 2012. I have it in the 2012 version, and it shouldn't matter much.

Images

Looks good to me.

That's it, I'll put it on hold. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 16:37, 10 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@CPA-5: All Done. Stikkyy t/c 04:35, 13 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I'll pass it. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 16:12, 13 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]