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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 20:31, 20 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Claim my seat here. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 20:31, 20 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

  • Post-war, she participated in Operation Magic Carpet British post-war.
  • I don't exactly get the gist of this phrase. Could you clarify?
  • provided a force of 9,000 horsepower (6,700 kW) Link Kw.
  • hangar deck: one on the fore, another on the aft.[3][2][4] Re-order the refs here.
  • equipped with 16 Bofors 40 mm anti-aircraft guns in twin mounts --> "equipped with 16 Bofors 40 mm anti-aircraft (AA) guns in twin mounts"
  • had been modified to carry 30 20 mm cannons Try to avoid two diffrent numbers next to each other.
  • Anti-aircraft guns were mounted around the perimeter of the deck Link anti-aircraft.
  • ferrying 78 aircraft and 236 men to Hawaii Pipe Hawaii tho the territory of Hawaii.
  • Kamikaze is overlinked.
  • who was launched off the deck when a 3.5 inch rocket --> "who was launched off the deck when a 3.5-inch rocket"
  • came under heavy Japanese kamikaze attacks --> "came under heavy Japanese kamikaze attacks"
  • Rear Admiral is overlinked.

Infobox

  • I cannot see the extreme width's length in the body.
  • "10,240 nmi (18,960 km; 11,780 mi) at 15 kn (28 km/h; 17 mph)" Link nmi.
  • Link extreme width.
  • "United States Pacific Fleet (1944-1946)" --> "United States Pacific Fleet (1944–1946)"
  • "1 × 5 in (127 mm)/38 cal dual-purpose gun" this gun is made in the US thus it should have English primary units instead of metric.
  • It has primary units leading over metric units, whilst the Bofors and Oerlikons have metric leading over primary.

Images

  • File:USS Makin Island CVE-93.jpg has a dead link same with File:USS Makin Island (CVE-93) gunnery practice.jpg.

Sources

  • Ref 9, needs a double "p" in the page numbers
  • Ref 13, same as above.
  • Ref 16, same as above.
  • Ref 17, same as above.
  • Ref 18, same as above.
  • Keith's source needs an access-date.

That's anything from me. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 14:24, 22 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@CPA-5: All  Done, except for one. Stikkyy t/c 03:49, 25 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]