Talk:Typhoon Ike/GA1

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 00:48, 24 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

This one's been sitting here a while, let's take a look. Courcelles (talk) 00:48, 24 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Assume "Typhoon Ike also struck a country a mere" should read "the country"?
- Done. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 06:55, 24 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
I'll admit I might be missing it, but why isn't the year mentioned in the lead?
- Added. If the title had the year in it, it wouldn't be necessary though. YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane 06:55, 24 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  - Of course, but this one doesn't :) Courcelles (talk) 14:32, 24 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"Ike briefly attained typhoon status briefly" Two briefly's in five words...
- Axed the second. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 06:56, 24 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"6,000 residencies" Don't you mean residences?
- Yes. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 06:55, 24 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"perfecture" is not a word.
- Fixed the typo. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 06:55, 24 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"The storm brought 76–127 mm (3.0–5.0 in) to most of the affected areas" The words "of rain" belong in there somewhere.
- Good call. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 06:55, 24 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"died fish," You mean dried.
- Yes. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 06:55, 24 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"of skin milk."???
- Fixed I think. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 06:55, 24 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]