Talk:Tui Manu'a Matelita/GA1
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 00:50, 23 July 2018 (UTC)
Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 00:50, 23 July 2018 (UTC)
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- No DAB links
- No dead links
- No missing citations
Prose Suggestions
[edit]Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.
- Suggest expanding lede with information on her not marrying, or the dispute over her death.
- Contemporary and posthumous European and American accounts of her life portray her as a helpless figurehead and as a white queen of the South Seas. suggest changing "helpless" to "mere".
- @KAVEBEAR: That's all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 11:49, 23 July 2018 (UTC)
- Changed prose as suggested.KAVEBEAR (talk) 16:46, 23 July 2018 (UTC)