Talk:Tui Manu'a Matelita

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Did you know... that Tui Manu'a Matelita, the Samoan queen of Manu'a, was described by Robert Louis Stevenson as "a little slip" of a girl, "who sits all day in a pink gown, in a little white European house"?

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 00:50, 23 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 00:50, 23 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Prose Suggestions

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Suggest expanding lede with information on her not marrying, or the dispute over her death.
Contemporary and posthumous European and American accounts of her life portray her as a helpless figurehead and as a white queen of the South Seas. suggest changing "helpless" to "mere".

@KAVEBEAR: That's all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 11:49, 23 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Changed prose as suggested.KAVEBEAR (talk) 16:46, 23 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]