Talk:True North (Once Upon a Time)/GA1
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Reviewer: Grapple X (talk · contribs) 17:18, 30 October 2012 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
Oh, hey, Krycek.
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
- "in a parallel with the story of Hansel and Gretel (Lord/Collins)" -> I'd say it's already implied that the kids fit these roles, so I'd drop the bracketed bit here.
"who invites him to hang out." -> seems a little informal.
" [in 'The Price of Gold']" -> both source and MOS use double quote marks ("The Price of God"), so stick with that.
"as Young Peter Bishop and Young Olivia Dunham" -> "as younger versions of Peter Bishop and Olivia Dunham"
"It earned a 3.3/8 among adults between the ages of 18 and 49," -> include a link to Nielsen rating and explain what the numbers mean (% of sets in use/total population)
"'ong enough to watch 'True North.'"" -> dropping the single quotes and adding italics would be an acceptable typographical change.
- "in a parallel with the story of Hansel and Gretel (Lord/Collins)" -> I'd say it's already implied that the kids fit these roles, so I'd drop the bracketed bit here.
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- Grand
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- Although it does seem complicated, I'm wondering if the plot section is a little long.
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Yep
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- Fine
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- Images are grand.
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Not a lot of work to be done here, on hold for seven days. GRAPPLE X 20:17, 30 October 2012 (UTC)
- Pass or Fail:
Yeah I know the plot is a bit long, but I can't really find anything useless to trim, as this is one of those series that usually has every little detail possessing some level of significance. Otherwise I believe I've addressed your concerns (italicized True North and tweaked the prose). Thanks, as always, for reviewing! Wow, that man certainly knows his science fiction...! Ruby 2010/2013 04:01, 31 October 2012 (UTC)