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HTML Error?

Just checking, but is it just me or am I seeing a lot of this?

--Bakahito 13:08, 6 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

No, you are right. Apparently the single infobox is broken. I will check that out. -- ReyBrujo 18:29, 6 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Fair use rationale for Image:Utada Hikaru - traveling.jpg

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Traveling (song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 03:21, 2 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

Looks good :)

Lead

Paragraph 2

"both on" should be flipped to state "on both"
Below it says it was also "certified gold"
Add the respective years to the tours in the sentence: "It has been performed on some of Utada's tours, including Utada in Bokuhan and Utada United."

Background and release

Paragraph 1

It's up to you, but instead of saying "her debut album First Love in 1999;", you could also say "her debut album First Love (1999);" But like I said, it's up to you
Instead of putting the instruments in parentheses, I would reword it as such: "The song included live instrumentation by Saito Mitsutaka, who played the bass guitar, and Tsunemi Kazuhide, who played synthesizers, while it was arranged by Utada and Kawano Kei."

Paragraph 2

Reword first sentence to "It was released as a CD single, in both Japan and China." please
No source for the first two sentences
Put "behind the scenes" in quotation marks like I just did :P
Add "vinyl's" before "artwork was a screenshot taken by Kiriya.[7]" please

Composition

Looks good to me! :)

Critical response

The "associate professor of biological sciences and" part is highly unnecessary
Semi-colon after "... it as the album's best track." instead of the period/full stop
"as one of her best songs" --> "as one of Hikaru's best songs"
Since you start mentioned accolades and awards for the song, I would add a small section title to this called "Accolades", right before the "At the 16th Japan Gold Disc Awards,..." sentence

Commercial performance

Nothing for this section at all; great, great work!!!

Music video

Paragraph 1

"travelling" --> "traveling"
"include the song's title..." --> "includes the song's title..."
"cover their face." --> "cover their faces."
"ore-chorus" --> "pre-chorus"
'Intercut' is one word

Paragraph 2

Every sentence in this paragraph begins with "the", followed by the corresponding part of the song; you can change it up, with something like "In the bridge section,...", "During the song's chorus..."
Rest looks good

Live performances and promotion

"It's" --> "Its"
Rest also looks good

Track listings and formats

Lowercase the 'v' in "vinyl" please

Chart and certifications

Weekly charts

The section title is "Weekly charts", but includes daily, weekly, monthly, and yearly charts. I would divide them up accordingly, making sure to place "yearly" charts in a separate section like you have and did in my previous GA reviews for your articles
Add the Billboard Adult Alternative Radio Songs chart here since you mentioned it previously
Pluralize "Certification" to "Certifications" since there are multiple (two) certifications listed

Other notes

Needs a "Release history" section to further support the statements previously mentioned in the article, plus most singles articles have it...

End of GA Review:

On hold for seven days; great work! Carbrera (talk) 21:56, 3 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Carbrera: Done and dusted

Regarding the charts section, I had re-organized and added a DVD chart for the DVD single. You can contact me whether its good for the article, or you can ask me to remove it. Your call; cheers CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 03:16, 4 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@CaliforniaDreamsFan: Just made one fix. "Wait & See (Risk)" is up next for review! Carbrera (talk) 03:28, 4 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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