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Reviewer: TbhotchTalk C. 02:09, 8 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:
  • Lead
Swift wrote had previously written the song and offered it to producers for the film's soundtrack -> This sounds very awkward.
Done.
"Today Was a Fairytale" is used 5 times.
I do not think it is not repeated too often. "The song" is used three times and "it" was used once. I still switched one "Today Was a Fairytale" to "it". -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 05:38, 8 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Composition
Weiner of Slate magazine -> Since it is an online magazine, it shouldn't be in italics.
Done.
  • Critical reception
Like the lead, "TWAFT" is used several times.
Think I took care of it. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 05:38, 8 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Chart performance
became Swift's first number-one on the Canadian Hot 100, a peak it maintained for one week -> It is a fact, but the source does not state it.
The source says it peaked at number one for the week ending ____. That suffices. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 05:38, 8 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Not that part, the part that says that it is her first #1 single on the Canadian Hot 100. TbhotchTalk C. 05:53, 8 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Added source. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 19:13, 8 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
debuted at number thirty-seven and peaked at number twenty-nine. -> comma (seven, and peaked)
Done.
forty-one in Ireland[19] -> forty-one in Ireland,[19]
Done.

This is really not too much work to do, practically are tips. On hold one week until 14 July 2010 (UTC) for the bolded comments. TbhotchTalk C. 02:09, 8 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ok for me all is fine, congratulations it pass. TbhotchTalk C. 19:17, 8 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
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