Talk:Time:matters

Possible re-write and copy editing required

I came across this article as one with few links, and upon further inspection noted that the 'History' section may have been taken from the company's website, judging by the fact that the sub section headers are the same in the references section and the history section. Yet, we would have no way of knowing, as most of the links in the references lead to 404 pages. In addition, the history section is written in a very corporate style. I am quite new to Wikipedia, so if I have made a mistake, please excuse me.

Removed templates:

Underlinked - I have now fixed this issue

Added templates:

POV history section - corporate style
Advert history section - as above
Copy edit whole article - I feel that this article needs to be re-written by some one far more knowledgeable than myself.

CitrusPenguin^t@lk 05:00, 3 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Remove list of airlines

I have made a copy edit of this article. I would suggest the long list of airlines, which probably changes frequently as contracts come and go, could be removed. Myrtlegroggins (talk) 22:12, 19 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]