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Tada! Zeki has landed. Will be reworking the article as I read the books. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Zekiw (talkcontribs) 05:02, 27 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]


For whatever absurd reason I've been rewriting the plot summary from the end upwards. I'll try to finish the first half soon. Then we can have it assessed for start-class. Any other important sections to be added? Zekiw (talk) 21:14, 24 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Assessment

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As requested on WikiProject Children's Literature, I have read this article through for assessment and upgraded it to Start class. To improve, I suggest you:

  • Find and add to the article several reliable sources (one is not enough).
  • Include in-line citations wherever neccessary.
  • Add sections to cover non-plot aspects of the book in more detail - for example, its conception, and critical response.
  • Explain any terms which may confuse users who have not read the series - make the article more accessible.
  • Extend the lead section to summarise the entire article.
  • Shorten the overly long Plot section.
  • Try to avoid in-universe perspective.

If you have any comments or questions about this assessment, please leave them on my talk page. strdst_grl (call me Stardust) 14:50, 19 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]