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Thikat e mia was nominated as a Music good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (June 1, 2022). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated.

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Thikat e mia/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Sebbirrrr (talk · contribs) 15:52, 1 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hi there. I'll be reviewing this article as part of the current backlog drive.

Remove the short description template since the infobox automatically generates the description

Infobox

Add alt text for the cover

Lead

"It's musically a pop song" → "Musically, it is a pop song"
"Some music critics met the song with positive reviews" → "Two music critics gave the song positive reviews"
"22nd edition of Kënga Magjike" → all words should be linked to Kënga Magjike 2021
"well-received" → WP:UNDUE

Background and composition

"Ramosaj hired the ThreeDots production team" → "Ramosaj recruited production team ThreeDots"
"In an interview" → specify with whom the interview was
"He further stated" → "He further claimed" to avoid repetition
"emotions.[2][3][5][6]" → spread the references throughout the sentence per WP:CITEKILL

Release and reception

"Upon its release" → remove "its"
Link music critics to music journalism for consistency

Kënga Magjike

Replace "See also" with Template:Main
"22nd edition of Kënga Magjike" → all words should be linked to Kënga Magjike 2021
"on the TV Klan's" → remove "the"
"displaying an Andalusian architecture-described image" → "displaying an image similar to Andalusian architecture"
Here you say that an editor from Illyrian Pirates gave the opinion, but in the previous section you said the staff gave the opinion. Was it the staff or an editor who wrote the review?

Credits and personnel

Link songwriting to songwriter
Link producing to record producer

Track listing

Everything is fine here

Release history

Everything is fine here

References

Copyvio score at 22.5% is good
For ref 1, YouTube should be tagged with the via parameter
SoundsEuropean should be tagged as a website for ref 4
I couldn't find any credentials for Illyrian Pirates, what makes them reliable?

Outcome

On hold for 7 days until all issues are fixed! Sebbirrrr (talk) 18:30, 1 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Unfortunately, per the comments at Talk:Bebe (Era Istrefi song)/GA1 I will have to fail this article. This article also relies heavily on Illyrian Pirates and since there are no credentials whatsoever, we don't know who runs this site which makes it unreliable. SoundsEuropean, which you've also used for the composition bit, looks more like a blog between two friends who do not work in the music industry. If you remove these 2 sources, then this article hasn't received broad coverage and upon a closer look, it relies on WP:OR. Sebbirrrr (talk) 23:42, 1 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]