Talk:There Goes My Baby (Usher song)/GA1
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Reviewer: --CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 04:22, 22 November 2010 (UTC)
Lead
[edit]- The song was later -> repetitive, try "it"
- Done.
- While reaching a peak of twenty-five on the Billboard Hot 100, the song topped the Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs -> doesn't read like a complete sentence. Should consider merging.
- Done
- favored the clip -> its not a clip, its a complete video
Composition
[edit]- was warmly received -> the song or his use of his falsetto range?
- Falsetto range. I think the current wording world imply that as the falsetto range mentioning comes after the song.
Chart performance
[edit]- solely from digital downloads as a promo single -> awkward
- Done
- since the inception of the chart -> what year is that?
- The year is not given in the source. It only says "inception."
- a feat not matched since his Confessions era -> a feat no one matched? or just him?
- By him, changed.
Music video
[edit]- screenshot -> too risque to include in the article :P lol
- Confused at what you are getting at lol.
- while he stands in a field and the sun rises in the background -> an the sun should be re-worded
- Done.
Live performances
[edit]- You write "performed" like 6 times. I know its tricky, but try and mix it up.
- Good work, very few mistakes :)--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 17:40, 25 November 2010 (UTC)
- Looks good. I'm passing.--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 20:54, 28 November 2010 (UTC)