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Date	Process	Result
March 26, 2010	Articles for deletion	Redirected
November 28, 2010	Good article nominee	Listed

Current status: Good article

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GA Review

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Reviewer: --CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 04:22, 22 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

The song was later -> repetitive, try "it"

Done.

While reaching a peak of twenty-five on the Billboard Hot 100, the song topped the Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs -> doesn't read like a complete sentence. Should consider merging.

Done

favored the clip -> its not a clip, its a complete video

Done. Candy o32

Composition

was warmly received -> the song or his use of his falsetto range?

Falsetto range. I think the current wording world imply that as the falsetto range mentioning comes after the song.

Chart performance

solely from digital downloads as a promo single -> awkward

Done

since the inception of the chart -> what year is that?

The year is not given in the source. It only says "inception."

a feat not matched since his Confessions era -> a feat no one matched? or just him?

By him, changed.

Music video

screenshot -> too risque to include in the article :P lol

Confused at what you are getting at lol.

while he stands in a field and the sun rises in the background -> an the sun should be re-worded

Done.

Live performances

You write "performed" like 6 times. I know its tricky, but try and mix it up.

Done. Candy o32 20:36, 28 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Good work, very few mistakes :)--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 17:40, 25 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good. I'm passing.--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 20:54, 28 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]