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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:44, 25 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:44, 25 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Can the caption be "Theatrical release poster"?
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add alt text to the image (WP:ALT).
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Washington, DC → Washington, D.C. (consistency)
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Remove the comma after Lewis Allen.
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a comma after Ruth Hussey.
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a comma after Harrison's Reports.
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a comma after Charlie Parker.
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Plot and cast

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Right on. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "grand-daughter" → "granddaughter"
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Dr Scott → Dr. Scott (consistency)
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a serial comma after "Rick, Pam" (both uses).
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The group realize" → "The group realizes"
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Cast section looks good.
Right on. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Production

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  • Here and in other sections, combine citations from the same source.
Done. I continued having citations where there was a quote though. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a serial comma after "A Matter of Life and Death (1946)".
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "in September 29, 1942" → "on September 29, 1942"
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a comma after "a copy of The Uninvited".
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a serial comma after "Allen, Partos".
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a comma after "in fact".
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Release

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  • "for the The" → "for The" (both uses to avoid repetition).
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:57, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Other than that, this section looks good.
Sweet! Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:57, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Combine citations from the same source.
Did this for some here. There's a few that I don't feel should be combined as they combine information from separate sources. But I've believe I've done what you asked. Andrzejbanas (talk) 11:18, 28 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Reception

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Legacy

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  • Try shortening the caption as it feels too long.
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 17:02, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 17:02, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

References

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  • Archive sources.
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 14:09, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Progress

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GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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