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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 05:04, 25 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Many thanks for taking this on. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:24, 25 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Lead
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  • "in 1954–55" → "from 1954–55"?
    • No, in that pair of years.
  • Mention Frodo's last name.
    • Done.
History
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  • Link philologist.
    • Linked.
  • "in 1954–55" → "from 1954–55"
    • As above.
  • "young cousin Bingo" Bingo? This needs a in square brackets explanation.
    • Glossed.
  • In "The crucial chapter", capitalize the races (hobbits, elfs), unless it was done intentionally?
  • "protagonist, Frodo" → Add last name.
    • Done.
Plot
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  • "The wizard Gandalf" → In other articles, I've seen you capitalize Wizard as well.
    • Done.
  • Link Isildur.
    • Moved link to first mention.
  • "a hobbit" → Capitalize.
    • Done.
Structure
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  • I don't see "there and back again" in the Tor.com review?
    • Ah yes, it's in the alternative version, the same thoughts presented in a table, which I've added to the citation.
Misc
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  • All the refs are reliable and spot-checks on the ones I could access found that they supported what they were used to cite.
    • Noted.
  • I would suggest adding alt text to the images, although it isn't required for GA. AryKun (talk) 05:04, 25 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    • All right, added.

I think that's all done to date. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:24, 25 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]