Talk:The Naked Brothers Band (TV series)/GA3

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 15:56, 26 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Way to many [citation needed] templates for GAN right now, and way too much clean-up. I also found a handful from just a quick view. Quick fail. Here are somethings you can work on though, and other reasonings for the quick fail:

Add references to the citation needed templates, much further reference problems, no references at all in some sections
Expand the article itself
WP:MOS recommends using straight prose rather than bulleted and numbered lists where feasible. That being said, I see way too many tables and not enough text.
All uses of "#" in this article, other than inside tables, should be "No.", as per WP:POUND
Big problem is crew section. Much unneeded trivia, that, as seen above, should use straight prose rather than bulleted. One example is coordinating producer, very unneeded trivia. Unneeded per WP:MOS. Only key crew are the executive producers, regular producers, writers, director. Most others, and all unneeded trivia.
Special appearances same as above
A regular - should an en-dash, –, as per WP:MOS
TV Ratings should be in reception, not episodes
Remove flags as per MOS:FLAG.
MOS:BOLD issues.
"film"? It is a TV show.

I'm sorry to quick fail this. Please try to add a bunch of reference, remove pointless trivia, and use straight prose rather than bulleted. Those issues are most key. Most references that are there, like IMDb, are not "high-quality" enough for Wikipedia, per WP:RS. Sorry. TBran dl ey 15:56, 26 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]