Talk:The Love Train/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 15:16, 16 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

This weekend. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:16, 16 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for taking this on. I’ll address everything quickly!—N Ø 15:38, 16 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

Needs new alt, I mean "A hot pink drawing of a locomotive". Remove "hot pink", that's no color
No genres?

Yeah, sorry. It's obviously pop but no reviews state that.

Edit: Actually AllMusic states "it's heavy on [...] persistent dance-pop that [doesn't] quite fit into the trends of the late 2010s". Is that good enough to add Dance-pop as a genre to the infobox?

Yes, please add it

Done

Lead

produced songs for the EP → sounds weird

I can't think of a better way to write it currently.

All of the material on the EP was produced by...

Remove the songwriters, its not vital to the Lead

and inspired by → as they were inspired by...

Partially

Done, but I tried to frame it better.

Top Current Albums → remove it along with its peak
Trainor promoted it with several music videos. → Trainor promoted it with several music videos for the other songs on the EP.
Add the genre now to the lead.
"All the Ways" was serviced to hot adult contemporary radio as a single on February 11, 2019. → "All the Ways" was released as a single on February 11, 2019.

Done

Background and composition

The opener → The opener and lead single,

Done

Promotion

You could point out it was one per day during a week.
One day later, the music video for "Good Mornin'" → One the following day, the music video for "Good Mornin'"
Add the directors for each video

The directors for all the videos were already there, except "I'm Down" which is a compilation of movie clips and there's no director stated in the description.

No other source than Youtube?

Yup, no secondary source covered the "I'm Down" video.

Done

Single

Let's merge this section with the one below, since this one is too small.

Makes more sense to merge it with "Promotion" imo, since singles are released to promote a record.

Done

Critical reception

Rename it to reception (see above why)
Idolator, BroadwayWorld, Radio.com → not italic
"celebration of romance coming from a singer who had reason to extol the virtues of love" → use your own words more often

Sorry lol, I wasn't the one who originally added this bit. Rephrased :P

Single and commercial performance of the album should be in the first paragraph, reviews on the second.

Done

Commercial performance

Remove Top Current Albums (see below the reason)
Should be included in the section above as well.

Done

Track listing

Fine

Glad to hear that.

Credits and personnel

Use {{spaced ndash}}

Done

Charts

I have some doubts regarding Top Current Albums as it is the same chart as Top Album Sales, but with catalog titles removed. Remove the former.

WP:USCHARTS doesn't seem to state anything about this, so I'll take your word and remove it.

I had a conversation with other user and we seem to share the same opinion. I looked there first, that's why I stated the above, before telling you to remove it.

Done

Release history

No italic on BigFM and Today

Source?

Done

References

Had some doubts regarding justnje, however, their about section seems fine.

Yeah, they seem fine to me too.

Done

Overall

On hold for a week. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:29, 18 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Made most of the changes with a few exceptions which I noted above.--N Ø 08:48, 19 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@MaranoFan: I add some little fixes, here and there. Take a look a them. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:02, 19 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@MarioSoulTruthFan:, I went ahead and made the suggested changes. I agree with all of them.—N Ø 16:21, 19 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]