Talk:The Legend of Boo-Kini Bottom/GA1

GA Review

Unsuccessful. Dr. Swag Lord (talk) 20:10, 12 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Dr.Swag Lord: Dr.Swag Lord, Ph.d (talk · contribs) Hi, I'll review this. 10:24, 12 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Main concern 1: The short length of the article is concerning to me. After doing a quick search, there are plenty of sources the nominator could have used to broaden the article [1][2][3][4][5]. As of now, the article falls short of criterion 3. It would need to beefed up considerably.

Main concern 2: I find a number of the sources used in this article questionable. The following sources do not appear to have proper editorial control, making them questionable:

allhallowsgeek (cited 1 time)
therockfather.com (cited 1 time)
thejoyofmovies (cited 2 times)
bubbleblabber (cited 1 time): Per a prior discussion, articles written by Daniel Kurland may be regarded as reliable, but he is not the author in this case.
showbuzzdaily.com (cited 1 time)

Together, such sources make up almost half of the sources used in the article. Per WP:QF criterion 1, I would need to fail this article as it is a long way from meeting multiple GA criteria. I wish the nominator luck on improving the article in the future! Dr. Swag Lord (talk) 20:10, 12 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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